Formal Essay for Women’s Literature ENG 2080-800 Summer II
2018
This essay requires students to demonstrate a deeper
understanding of two works of literature that they will read during
the first two weeks of class. In this 500 word essay students will
explain how the author or narrator of one work would interpret
another work. Some of the discussion questions provide writing
prompts to help students begin thinking about this essay. One of
these discussion questions could serve as an essay topic.
The essay will need to focus on one aspect of the works that
the student chooses to write about. One cannot cover everything in
500 words; therefore, essays must focus on a particular aspect of
one work that would be of interest to the author or narrator in the
other work.
Students will need to do some research. They need one
acceptable academic source for each of the works chosen. Academic
sources come from peer-reviewed journals or books published by
academic presses. Although one may find interesting ideas,
most of what one finds with a google search is not an acceptable
academic source. Spark Notes, Cliff Notes, Wikipedia, and other
similar sources also have their places, but they are not acceptable
sources for a formal essay. The UNCP library has many databases
that can be used to find sources. I recommend the MLA International
Bibliography, JSTOR, and Project Muse. The reference librarians are
very helpful. If students are not familiar with finding appropriate
academic sources, the librarians are there to help. All one needs
to do is ask.
At the bottom of this assignment, I include Guidelines for
Writing Formal Essays. Please follow these carefully.
Because we are so short on time in this five week semester,
we do not have time to conduct a formal peer review session.
However, I encourage students to ask a friend to read and comment
on their essay before they submit it. It would also be a good
idea to make an appointment with a tutor in the University Writing
Center to review the essay. Anyone reviewing this essay should
first read this assignment sheet so that they understand what the
writer is trying to do. Print this out so that it can be shown to
any reviewers. Students should evaluate any feedback they receive,
decide how useful it is, and then make revisions accordingly.
Ultimately the student is responsible for the quality of the essay
submitted; it is, therefore, important to evaluate any feedback
received and decide how useful it is before making revisions.
Requirements: 500 Words; 2 secondary sources and 2 primary
sources*; MLA format: Any essays failing to meet these basic
requirements fail will receive 0 points.
* Primary sources are the literary texts that you are writing
about—for example Louise Erdrich’s “The Shawl.” Secondary
sources are the critical resources that you will find using our
library, such as an essay about the narrator of Erdrich’s “The
Shawl”
This assignment will be assessed based on the following
criteria:
-the student’s ability to demonstrate a deeper understanding
of the two works that he or she chooses to write about.
-the student’s ability to write an organized coherent essay.
It should have a clear thesis statement or claim at the end of the
first paragraph. The body paragraphs must include a topic sentence
that supports the thesis statement or claim, and all the sentences
in the paragraph must relate to that topic sentence.
– the student’s ability to use evidence from the text to
support his or her argument. Paraphrasing, quoting, and summarizing
from the text all serve as evidence and must be cited. The evidence
must be integrated into the text of the essay using attributive
phrases such as “according to” or “as Smith asserts.” Students must
also explain how the evidence supports the claim. Never use a
phrase like “In John Smiths article found in the JSTOR database
‘The Narrator in Louise Erdrich’s the ‘Shawl’ on page 207 it
states. . . ” This is completely unnecessary and very bad
style. Most of that information belongs in the works cited list at
the end of the essay.
-the student’s ability to use correct grammar, style, and
punctuation.
-the student’s ability to follow MLA guidelines in formatting
the essay and in citing sources in the essay. Be sure to
study the information at these links and follow them in your
essays:
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Guidelines for Writing Formal Essays
Essays must follow MLA format . See
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To cite sources see
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in an anthology” and “an article from an online database.”
Be sure to include the identification, page number, and a
thoughtful and appropriate title on page one of your essay.
Use Times New Roman Font 12-point double-spaced.
Punctuate titles of works of literature and secondary sources
appropriately. Generally, longer works, entire books, journals, and
plays, etc are italicized with no quotation marks. Shorter
works, poems, short stories, articles in journals or newspapers,
and essays in books are enclosed in quotation marks, without
italics.
When you refer to an author in your essay, use her full name
the first time, e.g. “Charlotte Bronte wrote Jane Eyre.” Thereafter
use only her surname, e.g. “In Jane Eyre, Bronte elicits the
reader’s sympathy for the young Jane.” NEVER refer to an author by
her first name only.
Introduce quotations with attributive or contextual phrases
such as: As the narrator explains, ” . . . .” (967). When he
found his wife crawling around the room, John exclaimed ” . . .”
(458).
Always cite page numbers in parenthesis when you either quote
from or refer to the text—even if you paraphrase or summarize in
your own words. NOTE that the period for the end of the sentence
comes after the closing parenthesis around the page number.
Also note, only include the number NOT “page 967” or “p.
967.”
Where to place punctuation marks when you have quotation
marks:
If you have a parenthetical citation see 8 above; the period
belongs after the closing parenthesis.
Otherwise commas and periods will go inside of the quotation
marks, larger marks of punctuation such as exclamation points,
question marks, and semi-colons will go outside of the quotation
mark. So if you write: “In the short story “No Name Woman,” . . .
the comma goes inside the quotation marks. But if you were asking
someone “Have you read the short story “No Name Woman”? the
question marks follows the quotation mark.
Stylistic issues
Write in the third person. This is very important for formal
academic. Use she, he, and it; NOT I, me, and you. Since the
student is writing the essay, readers understand that it comes from
his or her mind unless otherwise cited. Therefore, there is no
reason to write “In my opinion . . .” or “I think. . . .”
When the gender of the person or character to whom you refer
is unknown, use gender-neutral language.
Spell out all words; do not use contractions. For example,
write “do not” instead of “don’t”
Write in the active voice. To learn more about active voice
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Proofread carefully for correct spelling, use of proper
names, punctuation, and grammar before submitting your paper.